Author’s Note: This story tells about my worst nightmare if you have kids 5 and younger, please hold on to them and prepare to have the scariest story told about a dream.
Once upon a time there was a family that was sitting at home watching TV waiting to see if a terrific travel place ad was on TV for the family to go to. At approximately 2:22 p.m. on Saturday afternoon, a travel brochure was on. The family paid very close attention to the TV. As soon as the number came up on the screen, Allison ran for the phone and tossed it to her mom. Her mom quickly dialed the number as the commercial disappeared. A man picked up the call and asked if she wanted to make a reservation. So, the man and Allison’s mom discussed the day and time and everything else. Angela, Allison and her father were jumping up and down clapping their hands because they had just booked a hotel and are about to have a dream vacation. Allison got so excited, she nearly passed out. The next thing that the family did was storm to their rooms and start packing.
After the family had gotten all packed up 3 weeks before their vacation, they all went to bed because they were so tired. Allison was not tired what so ever, so she pretended to go to sleep and half of the night she played on her iPod. 30 minutes later after Allison played on her iPod, she hit the wall. She couldn’t wait until vacation and she dreamed about it. Now here’s the dream. Allison and her family were on vacation and it was in 1200B.C. Her and her family were walking around enjoying the beautiful view. All of a sudden, they heard and felt large thumps of footsteps. Allison turned around and a 1000 foot zombie with his 1001 foot T-Rex. Allison screams, “Run for your lives!” Allison starts to run and so does her family. Angela screamed to Allison, “What are you talking about?” Allison pointed to the sky and Angela, her mom and dad turned around and saw the zombie and the T-Rex. Everyone started running around screaming. There was a white poodle named fluffy and she lost her owners. The T-Rex looked down and saw the puppy and grabbed its tail. The puppy started to yelp. Allison risked her life and went by the T-Rex and hit it in the nose with a stick. The T-Rex screamed and closed its eyes. Allison had just saved the puppy and returned it to the owners who came running back. Angela had the family’s puppy named Percy and he was barking up a storm. As the family was running away, Allison had remembered reading a book about T-Rex’s. When you go under a rock, the T-Rex will not bother you because it broke its foot in 1107B.C. Allison screamed to everyone, “GET UNDER A ROCK! GET UNDER A ROCK NOW!” Everybody thought Allison was insane but everyone did it including her family. Allison saw a hat that had a paintball machine in it. She took it out of the hat and shot it at the zombie and T-Rex. She hit them right in the head and they collapsed. Allison had saved the day! She was a hero! Everyone applauded and was glad she had saved her family and everyone. Then I woke up and the dream ended.
I really like you idea of your writing piece but I think the way you go into you dream is kind of odd but I don't really know what to chaneg it to sou good job. I really like how you saved the cute little puppy.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot! BTW you spelled change wrong. But thanks anyways!
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